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Great action, great indy production

This is top notch. A bit of dialogue (not only narrative) to pull a story together would be great, but definitely not necessary.

Not sure it's my computer playing stupid, but the "player" doesn't seem to work right. It seemed to load to 90% than I had to right click and play. Maybe just me.

Here's a tip - watch your Bs and Ps when you are recording on a mic. When you say a P or B word you air out your mouth which gives an annoying sound on top of your word.

Can't wait to see something new from you.

Boring and derrr?

Ok just read the previous comment. You are making SPAM intentionally as a joke?

OK - if you are going to spam intentionally, why not at least make it interesting. Like lie about the contents, but than actually have some cool in the content. Trip people out with a crummy description and thumbnail than chuck something cool in. That would be a cool spin on SPAM.

Your animation looks nice, and you draw nice toons. Why waste time on SPAM?
If you are going to make high quality SPAM, at least make it humorous, or trippy.

Yeah.

Wow!

You production values are first rate.

What methods and software did you use to compose this awesome Flash piece?

Don't be lazy

Come on. Dont' be lazy. I'm sick of seeing trailers (across NG not just you). Spend six months (not literally) and take your time and put something good out. You obviously have some ability.

Pretty cool, you need a theme song

Nice. I took one point off because I reckon you could have had a better ending track. Should make your own, a theme for the series.

Nice but

How'd you manage to get that file so large? Are you familiar with compressing images for the web? The only things I can see that would account for the file size is the background image and the music.
You shoud really optimise the background image, and try to learn something about audio files, bit rates and all that jazz.
I've given you 5 because I like your idea and your style would be cool once developed. You lost the other 5 to technical reasons.
You should try and optimise this file and upload it again to NG.

Cheers

stoneseeker responds:

hmm. yeah... thanks for the crit, I am used to just exporting as .mov's, and have never had to deal with making it web friendly (as I work for TV not web)
It's still certainly manageable to watch so I threw it up anyway, but for the future I will need to learn to compress better. If you have a link or two to some basic tips on how to "optimize" a jpeg and/or music without sacrificing too much qt, that would be even more helpful. Either way, I know there is a lot of info on this site to dig through when I get the chance. thanks for taking the time to help.

Nice but something

If you hard shortened this up and given it some pace it could have had some more impact. You've got a really cool style. Your characters look cool, I especially like the way you drew the humans in the animation.

Cool, but one little thing

Nice little animation - personally I think it could use being a little shorter, or make more transitions.

Cool

I like you drawing style man, it's pretty cool. It's a bit twisted but that's why I like it. That alter form Anusboy takes reminds me of the beasty form on the Xbox game The Suffering.
Hope to see more of this.

W-P-S responds:

I never played that game, so I wouldn't know

Absoulte Genius

Nothing much to say other than GENIUS. I'd love to see this fleshed in a full feature.

Drawing, and painting, wishing I was animating, doo, doo ta doo, dah!

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