Great action, great indy production
This is top notch. A bit of dialogue (not only narrative) to pull a story together would be great, but definitely not necessary.
Not sure it's my computer playing stupid, but the "player" doesn't seem to work right. It seemed to load to 90% than I had to right click and play. Maybe just me.
Here's a tip - watch your Bs and Ps when you are recording on a mic. When you say a P or B word you air out your mouth which gives an annoying sound on top of your word.
Can't wait to see something new from you.