moistzombie's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Singularity Part 1]

Would have liked to see a bit more for opening the story up, feels like a super sneak peak of a trailer. Like others had said, text is uncomfortable to read, and definitely need a mute button option. I don't think the music adds anything to the comic, just feels like it's there for the sake of it.

Some of the motion didn't really work for me either. If you are going make a flash comic, how much motion inside of the frames instead of just moving the pages around? That would be nice, wouldn't have to be all out animation, just some motion. You could add sound but only where it's going to add something to the immersion.

Good luck.

Cel-Studios responds:

thanks for the feedback.u had some good points, i'm still learning flash,i hope to have the kinks worked out by the time i post the next one

[WIZ KHALIFA: WHIPPED]

I'm not familiar with Whiz, but really, it didn't detract too much from the comedy. I'm guessing there were a few in-jokes that I missed. You had me chuckling a few times, but not outright laughter. The animation is pretty nice. Voice acting quality, spoken and technical quality are good, that makes all the difference between an average animation and good one. Plot and script was fairly tight, I just felt like the ending didn't really wrap it up for me - good have easily finished with the Pimp Gumby cruising off and Whiz wailing like a baby.

Look forward to some more of the series.

xCRISTYLx responds:

Yes, there were some jokes related to the celebrities. Glad you liked man. Thanks for lending ur time. I thought about ending it like that as well but wanted to add a lil more. I'll keep these coming. Subscribe to YouTube. Thanks much.

[COMET]

Nice job

Really nice job. You can see all the hard work that has gone into this project. A few more in-betweens in certain parts like the space ship, some less noticeable "tweening" and this would be perfect.

[Parasitemas]

Only on Newgrounds!

Seriously twisted. Score mostly for the fucked up factor. Music killed me by the end :-)

[NA - Anarchy in the UK]

Could have been funny

Pacing was bad, WAY too slow to punch line. Honestly this had a chance at being funny - I dig British humour. I get your joke, it was just delivered poorly.

I don't know of your drawing talent but considering there was virtually no motion you could have gone for some more interesting characters.

IF you can't draw, then I would suggest some voice acting - or collab with someone who can draw/animate.

[Cardboard City]

Nice concept piece

Great. Like the concept and the execution. Some inconsistency in style, but not that much of a problem that it spoils the movie.

Per previous reviews (7scars, Sandbagger) this kind of piece does not require plot, story, or any jokes.

Good collaboration - you should all work together again soon.

MorrowDays responds:

thanks, it would be pretty hard to achieve perfect consistency between very differing animators, but personally, Im happy with what we've got.

a lot of us really want to do a sequel, so I think that'll be in the cards. stay tuned ;)

moro

[Sliver (Demo)]

This isn't a demo...

It's the work a person who's too impatient to finish their work and want to some attention on NG.

You should post this in Alphas, or finish it first before posting.

(One star for the fact your stuff looks ok)