moistzombie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lindequist -wip-]

Not bad

Nice build up I think, good progression.

I soften up the synths that build up to about the halfway mark. You "triangles" sound more natural then the rest of your samples. There's a couple of high notes you are hitting on the "triangles" about 1:30 that are literally piercing my ears, mus be some kind of reverse B note, hehe.

I think you are on the right track for ending it though, it's a terrible way to end a song, but bottom out the rest of the tracks and let the main tune hold in and fade out the volume - could work.

Good luck

gingerspine responds:

Wow, I definitely didn't even think to fade out at the end. I'll give that a try. Thanks for the constructive criticism! Very helpful. I'll keep trying to work out the kinks.
Sorry about the high notes, hope your ears are okay! :p

[Failing Agesnt Evil]

I was interested until 0:10

I REALLY liked that beat you started with - then it just got a little yuck. I think you should consider using the initial beat and working on some other lines/overlays (for want of a better word).

Too much of a heavy contrast after :010. Contrast is good, but I feel like it's not melding together.

I think the initial beat lends itself to a more "progressive" build up - honestly I was excepting something epic.

At it's current state I could see it as a mediocre soundtrack to a chase/battle scene. Keep up the work.