moistzombie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Neurotic-]

Nice, really nice. Following you on FaceBook. \m/

Devastus responds:

Glad you like it, thanks alot!

[Dragon (WIP)]

Nice track - just like Halindir said, you need to rework your drum track, that'll go a long way to pulling the song together. A bit of work on the guitar track would be great, needs to be a bit more meaty - maybe a bass track to fill out the wall of sound.

Nice work.

Metallica1136 responds:

Thanks for your review! Yeah, the drums need to be redone, too bad I don't have my EZDrummer working, but I bet I could add an EQ to the Yamaha drums. Yeah, for some reason, the guitar isn't as thick as it usually is, and yeah, this is the first time I have submitted a metal song without any bass, but like i said, this is simply a WIP. Thanks for the review though, I appreciate your thoughts

[Wacky Jack '12]

Killer track - nice Meshuggah feel at the beginning. Face melting stuff. \m/

Devastus responds:

A wise man once said, everything is a plagiation of Meshuggah. If only I could play as well as they do, then I'd be set for business.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Epickk - GDTT]

It's a nice loop, should work some breaks in and make it an actual song. There's a nice idea here, I could see a nice bass line going in behind, then you could play with that to flesh out the song.

Indigoflare responds:

Yeah, I was planning on making it into a song. I guess i never fulfilled that goal! i'll work on it, thanks.
- Epickk

[Lindequist -wip-]

Not bad

Nice build up I think, good progression.

I soften up the synths that build up to about the halfway mark. You "triangles" sound more natural then the rest of your samples. There's a couple of high notes you are hitting on the "triangles" about 1:30 that are literally piercing my ears, mus be some kind of reverse B note, hehe.

I think you are on the right track for ending it though, it's a terrible way to end a song, but bottom out the rest of the tracks and let the main tune hold in and fade out the volume - could work.

Good luck

gingerspine responds:

Wow, I definitely didn't even think to fade out at the end. I'll give that a try. Thanks for the constructive criticism! Very helpful. I'll keep trying to work out the kinks.
Sorry about the high notes, hope your ears are okay! :p