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Nice concept you have going there, but needs a lot more work to bring the piece together. You really should take the time to put some more details into the piece or at least try and build some darker shading and add additional highlighting. You can see you have some talent, so work harder and let's see this piece really fleshed out!

Cenaf responds:

thanks. I just really lost my patience on this one :<

Nice character, the expression is classic. Has a really nice cinematic feel to it, could be a screen grab straight from an animation. I can really feel a story building up in my head just from this single image. Going to check the rest of your gallery right now!

Hey, really quite a nice job! Just a few things anatomy wise, I know he's the hulk and all, but the muscles on top the shoulders look just a little weird, particularly to the left side of his head. The left pectoral looks a bit "pointy" too, just looks a bit odd compared to the other, which looks right. While I understand the pose ordinarily might hide one's neck, being the Hulk, I think we should see some of this neck muscles, the head feels just a tiny bit recessed into his body, probably because the shading is very dark around the collar bone in contrast to the rest of the shading on his body.

Nice work, looking forward to seeing some more work.

Perspective is nice. Foreshortening done well. Back hand the blades I think should be a bit longer based on angle of hand, plus fingers look a bit awkward - I think the index finger might be a bit too long. I don't think the "marble" texture in the BG does the image any justice. Why not try a plain black background, or maybe some shade of grey so we can fully appreciate your drawing. Could be a difference in our monitors and all that kind of thing, but I think a better colour for the classic Wolverine "yellow" would be good. For me it looks a little like a dark mustard colour. Keep up the good work.

Drawing, and painting, wishing I was animating, doo, doo ta doo, dah!

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